This story was really good. If we ever write a story for charmed we'll be sure to put you as one of our favorite authors. Are you still writing stories? If not, you should be!

This was a great fic, but really sad. :'( I feel so bad for Dorothy, left all alone.

omg. that is like the saddest/most well written thing i've ever read on . im serious. that was REALLY REALLY REALY well written, i seriously did have tears in my eyes after i read taht story. that's so sad :(

great job (with the writing)

Wow! I was so happy when Prue turned out to be pregnant, but then it was like a downhill from there. When you say angst, you mean it to the fullest. Aww... poor Dorothy. All alone with no immediate family.

This is the saddest story I have ever read. Excellent, with a sweet-but-not-sappy ending. Perfect!

OMG, that was sooo sad... I seriously have tears in my eyes, :( You did such a good job. Your PA stories are the best ones. Now I gotta go read something happy, that was just so sad *sniff*.

OMG(dess)! You kill my favorite chars!

Okay, I can forgive you since you did it rather poetically. *shrugs*

But can you please work on your continuelity? 1st they're in the manor, then an apartment. And 1st Piper's daughter is Melinda then Hannah.

You're very good, though!

(No offense intended, this is just constructive critisim.)