I absolutely adore this, Erin, as I'm becoming much more fond of freeverse now -

It was beautifully written and I could feel the slight contrast in Jamie's thoughts, though he knew he wouldn't pay any attention to them because of his love for her.

Well done, that was beautiful

Aw, this is ADORABLE! I less than three it, definetly.

aw, thank you *sososo* much, this was BEAUTIFUL. and i do love jamie... this was just - perfect in every way, simply beautiful. love you! x