Bloody brilliant! I agree I was disappointed with the original scene, this was sooo much better :) x x x x

This is 100 times better than the reunion in either the book or movie. Really well done. Keep up the good work!

I agree that book Edward's reaction to seeing Bella again was a little...well..lacking. This was more like I would have expected it to happen!

loved it wish there were more chapters really cool and sweet story.

that'a more like it! Ms Myers has her characters way too calm, almost to the point of boring! Well done!

Amazing! I always wished that the reunion should have gone different in the book. You should think about making this into a full story. :)

This is wonderful! I wish this was really on New Moon. You should do the rest of New Moon in this light, Bella not being all ''you don't love me''. See how it would play out? Pretty please?

Nola

I loved this story! It was so good!

LOVED IT! Thank you!

I just wanted to let you know that I really liked your rewrite of the "meet again" scene! It was so sweet and I could definitely see it happening in the context of the actual Twilight. Not gonna lie, I wish it had actually been like that!

well written, but Edward isn't that...open?(is that the word?) And how does this fit back into the plot line? Isn't Alice supposed to walk in later?

That was so gooooood! I wish that's what happened in the book:)

*squeal*

loved this! I totally agree with how you think it should have gone down! Edward's reaction is so much more believable in this!

Loved it. And I love Twilight, but I don't have mush for brains. Ouch.

That was really well written! I agree that Edward should have showed more emotion and not have been as restrained as he was in New Moon in that scene.