Yay! Princess Bride! This chapter was really good. I love your story. You do really good characterization. I can't think of anything else currently so just good job.

I love this. LOVE IT!

It makes me laugh, it makes me want to cry, it makes me super happy.

It's just so damn good.

And OMG YES The Princess Bride IS the best movie ever.

And I definitely want to read that extra about Heng and Zian meeting for the first time! Not so much the one where he dies... that would be so sad, I didn't know what I was going to do before when I thought you might have decided to kill him and end it in tragedy. I'm so glad you didn't!

You just earned about a thousand awesome points for the Princess Bride reference!

Also, I love your story! Keep up the great work!

You ok? It's been a while.

A centipede... I'm terrified of bugs and I think if I saw one in my house I would run down the street, wake up my best friend and get her to kill it.

Ok I first want to tell you- HOLY S*** THIS IS THE BEST FREAKIN STORY EVER! I just finished reading the story up to 74 and I've been spending every night for the past week reading this till 4:30 in the morning... It so wasn't good for me and I'm not sure why I haven't died... xD Secondly- you are an amazing author, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! I've cried with Zian, laughed at the sudden, randomly hilarious comments, and even got extremely worried(and horrified) when Zhong Yu made that mention of the lab rats... Gawd that gave me shivers and I started getting all wary and nervous over the next chapters!

Haha and I love your AN. Mawwage. gotta love that Princess Bride, ne?

Aaaaw!
Awesome chapter!
Extras? Love extras!

Great chapter. I would really like to read an alternative end where Zian dies. I just love tragedies.

Yes, I am interested in reading both of those extras.
And I'm kinda ashamed that I couldn't recognize that quote. It sounds so familiar, yet... yesh.
Anyways, this chapter was great (like always).

Oh, this chapter is the sweetest of all! My eyes almost turned into two pink hearts while I was reading about proposal *_*
Zian's new birdlike behavior is funny, he must be very embarrassed)))))) I think that long fingernails are useful during the fight, but should be hehe rather painful during sex)))
About Zian's changing: the first thing I mentioned was his new way of speaking...it is more mmm free, if you understand what I mean. And I like that he is still so serious, any other person in his place would say to Heng to stay with him, because it is frightening (it really is!)!

and I'm superduperhupershmooper would like to read the sad ending as extra, and even more about first meeting (please please please write it from Heng's side! please!)
I wonder, how many chapters are left to the end...continue, continue forever!

Thanks for updating! It's funny that you added that little quote from The Princess Bride, because I was just watching it last night.

I don't think there is anyone who would oppose the extras you want to include. Specially because they are like getting freebies! and, of course, everyone loves freebies.

Now they are getting married! How sweet! *squeals* Now the only thing that we need to make it perfect is a wedding! Like the one in 'Haru wo daitate ita'... I loved that one.

XD I'd love to read and AE for the AE! I'm always in for some angst! 9 *gasp* There's another extra? MUST READ. NOW

I don't know what movie that's from (sadly), but I can say for sure that I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN AL ATE THAT CRICKET. OH GODS. THAT WAS HILARIOUS! I can just imagine his frustration at being so birdy-like

Every time I see a new chapter, I dread seeing "Complete" at the top... I'm so glad I found this story! It made my crappy Tuesday AMAZING. Along with every other day that I've read chapters I followed it through the original and was ecstatic when there was an AE, and now there might be an AE for the AE and I'm so HYPED! XD

I can't stop laughing!

Meanwhile, somewhere far from the city, Prince's golden throne sits nestled safely high up in the branches of a tree, covered in bird feathers and sparrow poop.

I LAUGHED SO HARD. Seriously, that was hilarious! I just tried imagining Aeolus as "King Aeolus" and it just cracked me up. Oh gods, I was so confused when he suddenly woke up again, but then THANK GOD LOLIDRAGON MADE IT TO THE OFFICE IN TIME. XD

Al is sooo confused Dib's gonna have a hell of a time explaining it all to him, like how he was stuck-up king of crows

Loool Al has no shirt XD

I seriously laughed through the entire chapter. w/