Just wanted you to know I love the chapter! It's short but it sets the stage for some big things hopefully. Hoping an update will be sooner than the last one...lol.

I hope you update soon, this is a great story! I want to know what happens next.

Oh my gosh, so super good...PLEASE update soon as possible! :D

you have to write more! please? it's so good!

Wow! This is really good! I can't believe your only 15! Please continue

hey, I really like your story... update soon )

You should totally finish this! I can't believe you are only 15!

Loving this story! Hopefully this story isn't abandoned!

I'm liking the story so far. I'm happy your focusing more on Cassie. The feel of the story is her journey in finding herself. Right now you have her angry and lonely. I say let her vent. :)

I'm all for a good anger scene. I'm interested to see what kind of Cassie will evolve as the chapters go on.

I like chapter 1 format per your question

Good start.

HI! so i really love this story and i was wondering if you were interested in a beta! i am a very interested! Thanks you SOOOOOOOOOOOO much for writing this awesome story! send me a message please!

Wow, this is really amazing! i was in awe! i cant wait for another update! i liked the first one better!

I really loved this chapter! I think that you should make your chapters a little longer and update ALOT more often! I was checking everyday to see if you updated! I sort of liked the narrative in the first chapter better. thanks for writing such a great story!

Hey guys, I was wondering! Um, could you tell me which dialogue you like better? First chapter or second? If you like it the old way, I'll write that way again. Just need your opinion, please!

This is good please write more! I can't help but wonder why the way you put dialogue is different in from the first chapter in the second one. It just seemed a bit weird no offense. I really can't wait to see where this goes. I hope Cassie tells Nick and Kira off soon!

Amazing.