I loved it! 3

I love its well rounded please tell me there is more.

That was beautiful. I loved it(:

I loved this. It is truly amazing D

It was good, i hope you continue it :D

This was amazing. Everything was perfect and IC.

This was a really interesting view into what Varen was like during the that scene. I agree their should be more Nevermore fanfictions.

plz wright a

nother chapter its so good to read the stroy from verans pvo.

Wow. That was just BEAUTIFUL. I believe I'm at loss for words.

But really, this is somewhat what I imagined would be Varen's reaction when Isobel left him. It's so heartbreaking. The language you used was indeed beautiful and very fitting, and you describe the emotions just as good. So now I am going to check out your other fics. :]

Though I have to say - you can't believe how happy I was when you said Pinfeathers is your favourite character. I thought I was alone, or that it was something wrong with me, but apparently not. I don't know what it is with him, but he's just so... wow.

I love nevermore and was going out on a limb to see if there would be fics. There is! this book is my fav of the year.

You are amazing with words, your writing is beautiful! Professional even, big leagues. I applaud you!

OMG, a Nevermore fanfic? Yay! :) This was a really good one-shot, I loved it. You capured Varen very well, he loves Isobel so much :') thanks for sharing this, I can't wait for Enshadowed to come out!

Oh my goodness, I love it!

It really captures the tormented-soul part of him, and also his love for Isobel.

And I 100% agree with you on the Pinfeathers thing. I mean, how can I not(although I did before I read this...).

Man, I wish I knew how to post stories. *sigh*

I'm sorry, I'm rambling! Well, I really like the story... so yeah... BYE! *grins like a Cheshire cat, waving ecstatically*

As always, you're very good with conveying the characters' emotions in your fanfics. Pinfeathers is my favorite character too. I always like it when he's in the scene. Isobel should've taken his offered hand when she was trying to save Brad from being buried alive; Pinfeathers had good intentions. There's a sequel coming out; it's called Enshadowed.

Yay! A Nevermore fic. Varen's emotions really came across and it's nice to see the complexity of the character coming across in the surreal situation he's created for himself. I love the novel and can't wait for the sequel "Enshadowed" and I think you've done Varen proud. :)

Oh. My. God. I LOVED this! Nevermore is like my favorite book ever so you can probably imagine how excited I was when I found this. And yeah, I agree, why aren't there any other Nevermore stories? I will admit I was a little disappointed when I saw that someone had beat me to write the first Nevermore story on this site. Oh well. You snooze, you loose. But anyway, fantastic job! I loved the way it was written, you did a beautiful job! :)