I really liked this story, I thought it was very in character. I found it a bit rushed at the end, would have loved to have the recovery bit explored further, detailed as the first half of it. But, never the less, a good story. Thanks!

Wow.

I really like this story, its very in character, and out of character to seem like a loss of control but still...in...er...yeah.

You know what I mean!

anyway, enough with my incomprehensible ramblings,

keep up the good work!

kes

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Revision was nice. Seems to flow more naturally. I like the looks into Trip's mind, seemed clearer. You could really feel his anger and frustration with the situation. Two thumbs up.

Hey. Just found this story. Really enjoyed it. Love angsty Trip. Very cool story.

Awesome! I loved it!

Coooooooooooollll. I liked it alot!

You do well with Mr. Tucker. I get so used to him being Trippin!Trip on the TV show. It's nice to see other sides to his personality, and to see a hero who just doesn't bounce back from every bruise & knock to the head that he gets.

Another nice story! I like the in-depth Trip (or Charlie!), he's one of my faves!

Hi Mara, I checked out your PTSD story and it rocks! I like seeing T's internal thoughts, and his explosion at R is great-in character, but just enough OUT of character, if you know what I mean, to make it really seem like a loss of control that would cause him to seek help. I don't think TPTB at ST:E think enough about the repercussions of the hideous experiences they force the characters to endure. It's up to fanfic to save the day! Keep up this psychological probing. Good work!

This is really good. As a semi-expert on Anxiety Disorders, I think you did a good job showing how they really are, while at the same time you've written a wonderful story.

I really liked this very much! Have to read more of your stuff!

Wow! I really like the way you wrote trip in the situation you put him in...very accurate. I loved it! Very cool, write more!

what a wonderful account of how Trip could actually be affected by the hardships of life on the Enterprise. Excellently written, love the emotions, the support, the solution, everything! And that last line was a Perfect ending! thanks!

LOL. It's more of a freshly-pressed angst where as Malcolm's is more like Jo's "cup runneth over" with old and stogey angst. :D

You know this would be very interesting to see on screen. Although I don't know if this is the reaction your gearing for, but it made me go "aw".

Note To LD Forum denizens: So, after our discussions, what do you think of my Angsty!Trip? Not to be confused with Jo's NakedAllTheTime!Trip...

Or my GodWhatIWouldn'tDoToGetIntoHisPants!Trip. ;)

Good story, Mara! It's hard to write Angst!Trip. You did a nice job.