Again grammer but great i wanna read more.

I love this! Maybe because its who I wish to be.

Im a dancer, although im not slim and short and pretty like most dancers are. I'm also not very flexible because i pulled my hamstring in year six and i havent had much flexibility since. I've also never had a guy like me before. Melissa is like who I wish to be. I love this story! xx

This story has potential, your writing is generally good but check grammar more often (and remove the :P and bracket notes). Keep writing and keep working - it will improve!

well, not to be offensive, but yeah, i can tell its your first. those little (-) filled with a comment can be taken out and added as the author's note. I like it but for your first time its a good start. :)