;_; Im sry... I've been kinda busy, and I did email you the other day. I think I had the wrong adress or I messed up or something. I thought for sure that you were dead or annihilated or something.;_; Ah well! Time to make wrong's right. This very night I will be sending you a comprehensive email on what should happen In my view, and of course since your view is just as valid, You can feel free to veto it in any way. In other news, the story is progressing nicely, and I think that our joint fic will work out great. Make sure you are reading the new and improved super duper version. It'll be alot more comprehensive. Its your vote whether you want me to finish my super duper version or not. Anyway, Ill email you tonight, cya!

Zell

I am so glad that you finally updated! This is one of the more interesting stories I have read in the BR section. Very creative. I think I reviewed before but I can't remember. So anyways write more soon and I hope you add a more detailed description of Melony and what her beast form looks like.

~Marti

Crossover! Cool, can't wait to see how it turns out. ^_^ Romance maybe?

Lol, bout friggin time. Now the storys starting to get intresting. You better keep on writing or I may not be so nice with you. ^-^. Now your true writing talent is coming out, with all this trippy mind crap. Im waiting for us to start our fic. I'm ready whenever you are. Also, dont be so hard on yourself for the first chaps, it wont help you at all. Anyway, my fic abilities have gone up and I hope to get working on the joint fic soon. Read my story "The Waltz Chronicles" on fiction press if you want some of my work. Anyway, email me so we can do this thing!

Hi! ^_^ Keniko!

The story is really starting to get better! You've corrected the mistakes in the beginning and the spelling isn't bad either. I also enjoyed the mental institution plot twist.

Keep up the good work and don't worry about negative reviews they're almost never meant personally.

~Marti~

Nice ^.^ You're doing great so don't stop. It's a little complicated, but I'm sure that I'll understand it when I read the next chapters. Keep writing, cause I'm waiting.

Nice story! It's coming along, but I must agree with the last reviewer on the fact that your main charry does seem 'paper thin'.

As for the other reviewers: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? RayClovis: For one thing you support other Mary Sue characters and pairings, like Shenielle (Shenlong x Danielle

*glances at the reviews below* oh my... Don't worry about those mean people who are against Mary Sue's, it stated in the summary for this story that there was romance between YOUR character and Kenji, why read a fic if you're against the couplings? I don't think opinions should be based on favorites.

(Even though I am a Keniko fan) I must say this is interesting. There's so few stories out there written in 1st person, and most often times it's hard to reveal as much depth as it is with other POV's. I'm glad you used a different format for your second chapter, sometimes it's hard to read when all the words are bunched together. I couldn't find any major spelling mistakes.. So already you're better off then most.

-Remember not to take criticism to heart, unless it's constructive and not biased. I for one think Mary Sue's are refreshing, especially after seeing so many fics with the same couples. Keep it up!

Ja!

-Fumetsu Hono'o

P.S. Work on your main character a bit, she's seems 'paper thin', try to be a little more descriptive. Hope that helped!

*draws his Grand Klaive* Y'all want some of this? BRING IT! Anyway, pay no attention to negative attention from Ray and Tiger. I too have a character, who just happens to like uriko *smirks* It's allgood. though i must agree with the wonderful basaracrawford in that paragraph breaks are our friends. and /also/ you need a little description, ok? things like, what's the main char's name, what's she look like? where's she at? things like that. Anyway, dress Mary Sue up and take her for a spin,k? None of the games actually /specified/ who was with who anyway, just certain tendencies of *sigh* Keniko. *smacks away the Keniko mob fans that cheer and try to shove a sign into his hand* Good job, make the next chapter longer,hmm?(read both 1 and 2, I mean make chp 3 longer.

Another great job!

Great first chapter. Keep up the good work!

Paragraph breaks are your friend. I'm neutral on Keniko so I ain't going to play Bloody Roar Discplinary Committee like some people... *coughcoughraycoughcough* Good work though... nice and fluftified

I think your story is great, Catgirl-chan. Don't pay attention to what the other's tell you-they did the same thing to me. They just hate Mary Suers-let them hate till dooms day, but they're still outnumbered by rabid fangirls/guys!

Again, don't listen to negative junkies. Please keep writing-we'll show them who's boss, eh? ^_^

_Ryoko_

Uh huh... I feel Like moinca lewinsky when bill clinton talked about her.

-THAT GUY-

Ah well, the thing is, maybe cat girl- We could do a joint fic in our next fanfictions. But It think your fanfic is pretty good. If you wanna talk to me about it my email is