Thats so similar to the story of the anime. I also kinda hated the Haruko that isnt brutally strict and drunkard

Nice.. I just think it's too similer to the original story.. i just think you should add some different twists.. Chinatsu seems somewhat different from Misuzu, a little more bold, that's good i gues.. the other thing is, Kaito seems a bit week, he gives in too quickly in my opinion.. It's a good story nintheless!

Good story! I was wondering when someone would write a good fanfic about Air! I was also wondering when there would be a new season with Yukito and Misuzu's reincarnations. They should make your fanfic the second season, but could I ask you to do something else with it? It looks very similar to the actual anime, and some might not like that... ." Just some friendly advice!