| Reviews for The Trade |
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LorneStar 5/22/13 . chapter 1This one always makes me laugh. It's a good short story about them coming together, but the ending is just the icing on the cake! Good job with this one! |
deanandjo4ever1 6/19/12 . chapter 1That was stinking cute |
AngusH 4/12/12 . chapter 1Really great :-) I like this vision of them living on the ship, it's hopeful and optimistic. I also like the way that they're each trying to improve themselves. Plus it's funny too. |
PerfectDisaster22 2/7/12 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this oneshot. I loved how the characters interacted, and how they each had something to bring to the table. I liked how all the lessons brought them closer together and made them function as a team. Great job! |
Mikhyel 8/13/11 . chapter 1This? This is magic. I love the slow building of a family, not simply through being around each other, but from equal exchange of knowledge. It puts everyone on an equal footing, which simply being around someone long enough to tolerate them does not allow for. It instills value into the relationships, because all of the participants understand the strength and weaknesses of the others, and that each person has something unique to share. |
Lord Death's Paramour 7/27/11 . chapter 1Who knew that watching the crew learn the value of reciprocity could be so entertaining? Very well done. |
JimBeamer5 7/25/11 . chapter 1Yep, a change is a as good as a holiday. Nice story, brought a smile to my face. Only one thing to improve it - RAYNE! |
samson28 7/15/11 . chapter 1 really enjoyed. |
JustLikeToRead 7/12/11 . chapter 1Awesome story! Loved it! Thanks! :) |
Freyalyn 7/12/11 . chapter 1This is fun - and such a good idea! You usually manage to capture everyone's character spot-on, and Mal is brilliant here - quite convinced the entire universe is out to get him even when the evidence isn't there. Thank you for writing. |
MazokuTenshi 7/9/11 . chapter 1Oh, I just loved how everything developed! I thought it was simply a Rayne friendship thing, but I'm glad it turned into the whole family bonding kind of schtick. And Zoe drives a hard bargain, that she does. :D |
lgmuk 7/9/11 . chapter 1 good story |
ljm 7/9/11 . chapter 1A nice and enjoyable story. Suprised at Jayne's restraint over Rivers name calling. |
unlock.your.heart 7/9/11 . chapter 1This was awesome! I really enjoyed the character progression from start to finish. My favorite bit had to be Zoe at the end offering to trade all Mal's embarrassing stories. It was a fun read. |
bladefax 7/9/11 . chapter 1Loved it! Got more? |