|Reviews for Sins of A Solar Empire: Push them Back|
| Patriot868 4/24/12 . chapter 13
I personally think this story is going good. However, I do have some crticsms. I am having trouble telling things apart do to the fact that the paragraphs are huge blocks of text. Try breaking them up.
This one is more of a question. Will the advent appear?
And third. Your characters are startin to get mixed up. This is probaly my fault, but I think it is because the text is, err, blocky and large. Fix that, and your golden.
| pacificuser 11/29/11 . chapter 1
wow! this is certainly a very good find! A rare diamond in a pile of often overlooked stories! Keep on writing! a very cool science-fiction story in the tradion of hard sciefi like traveler RPG! Do try to proof-read your work,too many small errors that spoil the fun... thanks! please update soon!