|Reviews for Double Life|
| Miss anon 12/3/12 . chapter 17
OMG I love this story! I've just been diving into these chapters for the past 20 minutes, they're so good! I hope you update soon!
| reader terrible-writer 12/3/12 . chapter 17
yay! finally! An update! . . . I'm done
| TigerSneak1 12/3/12 . chapter 17
So far Gold and Crys are just kinda like background characters with a little importance. I hope that this is remedied later. However, Crys is getting a spot as Oak's assisstant later, and Gold is definitely the hacker. Why am I so sure about the second part? Easy. Your response to Shadowhunter's review made it definite. But other than that... YOU UPDATED! WHOOOOOOO! HELL YEAH! It has been a while since you updated, so I was extremely satisfied when you did update. Yellow's background gets a gigantic amount of story in this chapter. Will it be a big part of the story later? One can only wonder.
| BreadStarz 12/3/12 . chapter 17
Yesss, I seriously thought you were dead.
As much as I like your battle/fight scenes, normal everyday scenes are great too, like this shopping one.
This chapter really showed more depth into Yellow's past-will you be slowly doing flashbacks or are you just going to post the whole shabam at once?
I didn't know your new story, Love IS War was out! I was waiting for it but forgot about lol.
Nice to have you back!
| Shin H. Vega 12/3/12 . chapter 17
Glad to see you're not dead! Great story update, as usual!
Poor Yellow...it seems in a lot of fiction she's always the victim. I surmise you have and excellent shipping plan, yes?
Blue's top coming off?! I hope both Silver AND Green will be there to see that!
Anyway, glad to see you're back, and I'll be looking forward to the next update!
| Astrid01 12/3/12 . chapter 17
YAY THE DATE IS NORMAL NOW!
uwahh that was such an awesome chapter ;; poor Yellow. I love her. And Giovanni HOLY SHINX
Continue soon, I BEG YOu ;;
| StattStatt 12/3/12 . chapter 17
UPDATE! WHOOOOOOOO! ! ! !
Oh Blue, how I love you so much, you're hilarious and is keeping Misty away from Red so he can be with Yellow. You're character can't get any better, and I love you for that (though I still like Yellow a tad more)!
Poor Yellow too she must have had it rough. Though Red will probably make her feel better. 'v'
And OMG OMG OMG PLOT TWIST PLOT TWIST PLOT TWIST! I honestly wasn't expecting Giovanni to be a good guy (he is, right?), no less a victim to the whole thing.
And Silver's adoptive parents are the bad guys? Plot twist of the year, hands down (I'm so good at gushing! XD)!
Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much mor! (o'w'o)
| 5th Dimension 12/3/12 . chapter 17
This is awesome. Giovanni, Silver, this Anita woman... all connected.
Blue apparently decided that the best time to make sure the boys did something dumb was at the crack of dawn. And boy did it work.
Oh, Yellow... at least you're mostly safe from the others seeing your scar. After all, how often are they going to see your bare back?
Red teaching Yellow to swim... Blue's top coming off?! Not sure how things could get more... awkward than that. How could you even top it? (no pun intended)
...And Lyra! It'll be nice to see her again.
If I may be frank, there are quite a few grammar/spelling errors riddled throughout the page. Enough to be distracting. You should probably reread your chapters to search for them before publishing.
No questions this time. Last time had enough to carry over!
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx 12/3/12 . chapter 17
Yaaay for the new update and I can understand fb is really addicting. Even I am addicted to it, it's so fun to chat with other people from different countries and joke around. Do you play dragon city? I do and man I love that game XD. It's so awesome.
Well I laughed so hard with the bikini shopping part Blue had them completely in her grasp. I can't wait to see what will happen in the beach. I did had an idea that Silver's adoptive mom might be a bad guy, but what is she planning and why?
Giovanni appeared! So unexpected and cool. I wonder if the other dexowners would appear too, like Black and White.
I really feel sorry for Yellow she had such a terrible childhood after the dead of her parents and she's still struggling with the scars that the past left her with, well at least she still has some fighting spirit left in her. Or a bit too much, but it's funny how scared Green and Blue become because of Yellow. XD Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter! Ever sine you started writing this, I've been a fan of it. :D
| Berry Doyle 12/3/12 . chapter 17
Wow, busy chapter! Lots of new information.
Nice to learn more of Yellow's backstory, especially with her uncle. Tragic though the whole thing is.
Wow, was not expecting that twist with Giovanni. But hey, the guy is one of my favorite characters, so I'm glad to see him!
| MuggleCreator 12/2/12 . chapter 17
Oh wow. Anita and the gang are evil!
Poor captive. Silver's real dad!
| JustACreepyFangirl 11/15/12 . chapter 16
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
*two hours later*
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
*three hours later*
| MuggleCreator 11/14/12 . chapter 16
Nice stuff. I wish the Inside was really playable!
| StattStatt 10/31/12 . chapter 16
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY! I have read through this story now and I can only say that I just simply LOVE it! The personalities are spot-on, a bit of OCC but that just makes it better! The way the whole system works is just awesome, and there is little to no thing in this story that doesn't make sense (considering we are talking about pokémon right now, making sense in an entirely different issue, but whatever), and there is NOT a Thing that I don't like so far (except Misty. B*tch better stay away from Red!)!
The whole plot is intriguing, and leaves you hanging in that way that makes you desire so much more!
Oh, and reading this is also freaking HILARIOUS! Never a dull moment in this story, wether it be humor, romance (so cute) or action!
Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more! (o'w'o)
| UniqueNeko 9/29/12 . chapter 16
Great story! Keep up the awesome work! :D