|Reviews for the best and worst date ever|
| allyson 5/9/13 . chapter 3
he said I love you , will you marry me ,I never want to be apart from you , I have to leave for another exam/ to the magical world , I love you do you love me , I really really like you a lot or he keeps trying to say the above and never does because they keep getting interrupted or he tell her at the end
| Annie 3/30/13 . chapter 1
Go to the site and read the 4th chapter
| NinaYamada-Zero 12/30/12 . chapter 3
He'sgoing to say he loves her, duh! It's kinda sweet, everyone seems to come up with cute ideas for that, but this one is a cliffhanger! Nice! Can you please update soon?
| AlphaWolf13 8/5/11 . chapter 1
Hey. Great to see you trying out writing. Don't get too discouraged by negative reviews. You're still learning. As far as storyline goes, I can't help you because this isn't a universe I know anything about but any other writing for other fandoms I can totally help out. Keep at it. You'll only get better the more you write.
| KittenNya 7/25/11 . chapter 1
I liked it so far and can't wait to see what happens next! The only thing I'd like to suggest is make it have more detail I felt like it went by too fast. But that doesn't mean it wasn't good! And don't forget is was your first!
| Sincerely-a-person1997 7/20/11 . chapter 1
You make things way to obvious also,not enough details in your story, poor outline,poor writing all course there are so many more things wrong with your story but that's all I am going to say. Please improve.
Sincerely, A person :D
| writertypewhohasn'twrittenshit 7/17/11 . chapter 1
HAI LLama chan! I can't pm you now 'cause I'm a new user :P but I'll do so later :D 'Just wanted to say hi and what's up?
writer type / John / (did I have any other fake names?)
PS: you're story is really good for a first time writer, the voice is wonderfull and it flows nicely. I look forward to seeing more :)