Mark is adorable. I lurve him. Update soon please!

You kno this could of been a cute one shot bmif you didnt want 2 make it a story. But I cant wait ubtil maddiebgoes bak 2 skewl and tries to aurvive

Yes! Update! Poor Gramma Helen. :(

This is so sad! *sniff*

It's nice that there's a fic in this category other than romance, which I love, but we all need a break once in a while. And this deals with a very real situation. :)

I was kinda expecting Hart to come and save from all the peril. :P But I guess it's too cliched and all so yeah. And I like how you sent the message across that Gramma Helen had died through those email thingys. It's cool. :D

As much as I want you to write more, you shouldn't make it a multi-chap... Because this is already like a one-shot, and nothing's worse than a perfect one-shot which is ruined by an endless array of chapters afterwards with no plot. Oh wells.

Keep writing! :)