I thought it was good. But it could have been taken a little further. Like: what happens after that? Do they get into any danger? or peril? Do they end up having a kid at school? People love suspense and drama. So try to take it there a little bit more.
*You're GREAT at adding deatails in the story. I loved that!

ew shoot me. that is soo cliche. the title drew me in, but then you really didnt stay true to lily and james' personalities.

that's sweet ;3

aaaahhhhh...that was really sweet;) I also REALLY love the title! Ciao for now(_)

it was a great story i really like it i only review good ones

I don't think you did too good either

cute, short and cute, all there is to it. love lily and james fics!

Aww. That was cute. Maybe you could continue it, though? A longer one would be better. 0]

Please review my story "Wherever You Will Go"... Please? I'm desperate for constructive critism.

Cute! So romantic! Wonderful story! :)

sweet, sensible, cute, lovely, made me cry, blah blah blah blah blah blah...etc. etc. ect. ect. ect. ect. ect.

Boring and mushy

Akira,the title was enthralling.I liked the story ok.How do you like your pic?You havent called,so I assume youre busy.(PE 2 is SO great!I cant get over it!)Anyways,I have to go now..Hopefully youll call,or maybe fan fic alert or whatever.Bye Bye.

I. HATE. CLICHéS.

Great for the romance people, but otherwise...

Sweet.