I actualy started crying during the end of chapter 8 but i adored the ending!

Gah. Your fluffy...it bruises...It started out so *cute* and then it got so *sad*! *pouty face*

And I *really* hope those aren't the same set as before, I hope she just remade them, because they shouldn't have to keep living forever...

But littlekid!Yue and all of them (but especially Yue) was adorable... :3

I like this story. This chappie is my favorite one. :) I don't really like the ExS part in the last chapter, chapter 9, though. I think it would've been better if you didn't put that part. :3

KAWAI!

(ha ha)Sorry, I was just laughing about a song I made up about your fic! Oh, what a sexalent story this is.

(BTW emus can NOT walk backwards!)

It's so cute. I find that I can't stop squealing. I like this chapter so much. All the presents ruined by Ruby was such a good idea, it's so like her. I really do like this story, most interesting one I have read about yue and clow yet.

I wanted to review on the first two chapters that I read but just didn't because I was lazy, but now I am. I would like to say that I just absolutely love fluff. And how you made Clow created them is so adorably cute. Never would have thought of it. I especially like the things they say. So so so cute. The second chapter where kero was glowing and clow said 'pretty' and then he saw yue glow and he said 'even prettier', that was my favorite part. I absolutely thought it was the cutest thing ever.

Good fanfic. I like how everything circles back on itself.

*claps*

(none to be said in this review just plain clapings)

AW that was so cute! ive never read a fic about clow before. i loved it. 0 i really liked clow and yues little challenge match over the breakfast table. loved the fic, cant wait to read another one by u.

It's CHOBITS! That's what this is!
::takes a deep breath::
You are very, very weird. In a good way.

You are a very hyper individual. This story (and your brain) seem to inhabit this intricate other plane created from knowledge of certain fictions I haven't read. It's intriguing, though. O_o
Erm, this is an interesting sort of... alternate universe thing. I don't really see Yue's creation having happened this way, but it's a humorous take on the Guardians' creation.
I like the Yin-Yang thing. And the idea of a smallish Yue (instead of his just appearing in adult form) is a little mind-bending. This 'fic makes me giddy, but that could just be the Queen playing.

Are you a Chinese? Or Where did you get those words from?

My friend here need help with her fic, she needs some chinese words, but since she's far too shy, so I'm asking for her.

Please tell me through your next upload for this. Your sequel to the "Tainted" also will do.

Mistress: Wha! T_T Poor Yue! Angels can't die! Especially not IMORTAL angels!

Sannji: What about the other's?

Mistress: SCREW the others! They're just a munch of annoyingly sugar high freaks!

Kero: Hey!

Sannji: ; Despite how negitave this may have sounded so far DrM, she really did like your fic. Only the really good ones make her cry like that.

*View changes to Mistress who is in a corner balling like a baby.*

Mistress: YUE!

Sannji: -_-' I rest my case. One little thing though. You kinda messed up on Clow's death. Ever read Parth the Fourth of CardCaptor Sakura Master Of Clow? There's this really awesome flashback scene in there that tells you about how Clow told Kero-chan and Yue about the whole...dyeing thing. -_-' Good job Sannji, you just made yourself sound like a total dork. Well, anyway, so this thing tells you how Clow appionted Yue the Judge, and Kero the...the...scout?

Well, read it. (Assuming you haven't already.)

Ja ne,

Mistress of Goth & Her most unstable muse, Sannji

Aw! So sad! You killed nearly everybody! And you still call your fic a humor fic... But it was great! It was so sad! sniff-sniff... But I really enjoyed it! And it had funny movements too! . I love your story! *adding story to favs*