Wonderful. Zen makes Yelena sound extremely omnipotetent. Haha. Anyway, I, as always, loved the writing, and though this chapter was slightly shorter than the others, the quality did not decrease in the slightest. I will, as per usual, be ecstatically awaiting you next update.

Hollow-Kuchiki

And the games are starting... great, great. I love how you're portraying the tributes as well. Absolutely lovely. I was ecstatic when I saw you updated. Can't wait for the next!

Hollow-Kuchiki

I love this fic so much; I'm always really excited when you update. :)

The arena is just perfect. I've never read anything like this, and it's refreshing to see tributes in an original area instead of the typical forest.

The Career pack is still very creepy, as usual, but I do like Noah. He's easily one of my favorites at this stage. I don't really remember much about the two Sevens, but I like their small alliance even though I don't think it will last very long.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh! this was really good!

Wow... that's a very unusual twist for the arena! I very much liked this chapter (along with all the others). You're honestly, a pair of completely stunning writers! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hollow-Kuchiki

Oh! Write more & write it quicker! Please

Another great chapter. I love your writing! I love the tributes opinions on the other tributes as well, cause a lot of people don't bother to show that, or show the distinguished relationships between the tributes. You also use lots of advanced wording, similar to myself, which just makes the writing more fun to read. It is always great to see a writer(s) with a capacious vocabulary. :)

Hollow-Kuchiki

Hello. I'm here to tell you that your SYOT is against the guidelines. I notice you have already gathered the tributes, so I suggest you take down any lists(Tribute lists) and maybe delete the story when you're finished. If you decide to do another SYOT after, collecting your tributes can be done on a forum like District 15, or simply ask reader's to PM tributes. District 15 can also be used for any sponsor systems. I hope you will do your small part to help clean up the fandom.

-District 14

I love the story. A little difficult to understand because you seem to want to rush to the arena, I don't blame you. Great story. Can't wait to hear more.

Another brilliant chapter. I really liked how you captured Yelena's personality; it was done to near-perfection. I'm so happy we aren't sitting through 24 reapings either. They get so old.

Once again, your errors, if any, are unnoticeable. The writing style is amazing. I really don't have any bad things to critique, so I guess this is it for my review. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hollow-Kuchiki

Me gusta I like how you're not doing the reaping for each district, the train ride for each district and so on - takes up more time that way and it gets annoying. Also, your style of writing is good and flows well :) And Asha was fabulous; the interaction between her and the District 2 boy was admittedly sweet.

Then speed at which this fic is moving is refreshingly amazing. No muddling around with 24 chapters of Reapings. It's just great. But the quality of your writing doesn't suffer at all - every word of this chapter was eloquent and beautiful. It was a pleasure to read. :)

Ah! This chapter was great. I especially loved the bickering between Katerina and her mother. I'm also very glad that we won't be lingering in the Reapings for 24 chapters. Can't wait to see more.

Your writing style is very good. I can't notice any mistakes.

I'm already rooting for the D2 Male and D3 couple. Can not wait to get more!

Great job. I felt I was really able to get a sense of each tribute's personality and thoughts in each of their parts. I like how you aren't going to just write 12 reapings, and instead are working your way up to the games by writing different districts POVs for each thing (D1Reapings, D2Goodbyes, etc.) It really does save a lot of time.

Your errors are pretty much unnoticable, if any. I like the style of writing as well. Third person is always harder to write than first person, in my own opinion, but for SYOTs, I think it is the more practical style. All in all, I felt this was a really enjoyable first chapter, and I cannot wait to see more.

Hollow-Kuchiki