This was so good! I watched Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows part one just a few hours ago. I feel so sad for Ron, though, which is unusual, because most people make him so jealous. I'm glad Dobby didn't die too.

The description and the action was so nicely written. The only thing I'm confused about is if this is a one shot or a continuing story... It'd be great as either one! Good job! ;)