It is not melodramatic crap and does not suck!

In fact,it is beautifully written

Hi,

I don't know if I've reviewed this before, but I absolutely love it, and it's one of my favorites. I think it's incredibly original, and it's got heart and a mood to it that I just think is awesome. You haven't updated in over a year. Have you abandoned it, or do you just not update anymore?

Again great chapter, i liked it a lot. whatever happened to the little kid though, i forgot his name...oh well. anyhow, PLEASE keep continuing, i beg you...

I am SO glad you updated this story. every couple weeks i would check to see if anything was new. that's how much i loved that moody way you write. this chapter was an interesting look into Evie's mind (in my story i tried making her not some ditzy girl too, a lot of people like to make her stupid). can't wait to read the next chapter.

-Trip McNeely

This story is great! I love the way you write, its descriptive, hopeless, and horribly blunt, perfectly giving the overall atmosphere it should. Its also unique, and not too many people write their take on steve so I like how youre doing that. Keep it comin. Alicia

Whoa you've got a real way with words. I'm really liking this :)

This is truely well written. Just wow. I just love the whole moody atmosphere of this story. I'm printing this out to read again because I truely enjoy your writing. Please continue

Oh my gosh, this is amazing! The last couple chapters were great, I especially love your characters. They are so unique and you have every aspect of them down pat. It's so cool. The Jonathan Cade part in this chapter is beautiful. That just seems the word to describe it, and I feel so bad for Enoch. I'm really interested to see where you take this story. It's really great!

That was really good. But strange. I liked it.

Do you wanna know why you only have a few reviews for such a great story? It's because people read it and say, "That's so good, I don't know what I can write to explain how much I like it." So they just don't bother. You've got depth here like I've never seen before. Write more.

Pele Queen

interesting style... very interesting.

Ooh! That was really really freaky/cool. I love your stories they are just so original. Enoch is the most original character of all. It's amazing what you do with symbolism and characters. I don't know if I told you this already, but I feel like I'm getting a new deep message with every sentance. Keep on writing!

That was unbelievable. You're crazy if you think you can't write, that was amazing. Are you going to write more? (You should. I'm hooked.) Hey, I'll be checking back to see if you wrote more!

Wow..this completely blows me away every time I read it.

Starstruck, never EVER stop writing!

Wow, this definitely kicks ass..it adds so much depth! I LOVE it!