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   Pollardinator 4/21/13 . chapter 1Interesting idea,and a good opening to thing though,if theres a flashback it might be better to put it in italics to make it stand out,so the flow of teh story isn't a suggestion but,eitehr way,a good story! |
| frow234 2/14/13 . chapter 1 Nicely done ! |
| eh 6/12/12 . chapter 6 eh |
| Haley-LeatherJacket 2/2/12 . chapter 5 Great story it has alot of potential and I can see Capcom making this as a DLC Keep it going bro, I wonder if Pyscho Frank will return? |
| Helloivecoveredwars1 11/19/11 . chapter 5 This is just a great story. The only thing that I can say is the intro isn't solid enough. Why would they be going to a mall to see a movie if they don't even live in that town? When I originally thought about this idea a few months back, I thought Chuck would be there for an Ijiek convention. Still, great story, honestly I think when your finished you should send it in to Capcom for them to see. Thats how good it is. |
| Piklink 11/11/11 . chapter 5 Oh shit, Frank lost it 0_0 I never thought I would hear his catch-phrase being used in an evil way XD |
| ttobba95 11/6/11 . chapter 5 May i ask, did OneWing give you permission to use her story as a chapter for this fic? |
| OneWingedAngel070993 11/5/11 . chapter 5 All I can say is well done LOL :D Keep up the good work I know you can do it. XXX |
| Piklink 11/1/11 . chapter 4 I really like this! Idk what you plan to do now, since it's been 2 months since you updated, but it'd be awesome if you continued with this! |
| Meowth's Toon Dragon 9/18/11 . chapter 4 I gotta admit... This ain't half bad! A FEW spelling and grammar errors on occasion, but for the most part, this is really solid! I'm eager to see more! |
| writer of the apocalypse 9/1/11 . chapter 4 This is pretty cool so far, but you keep using some of Frank's lines " Don't sneak up on me like that!" I just wanted to point out that the two have very different personalities, so it'd be a good idea to change up the dialog in the future. |
| writer of the apocalypse 8/28/11 . chapter 3 Very nice, can't wait for more. |
| ttobba95 7/11/11 . chapter 1 This story has potential, but the way you've written it does not. I encourage you to write longer sentences and better paragraphs. Give more detail. This is not a flame, it is mearly constructive criticism. If you want, i can offer my help to make this fic good. You could start by re-writing the first chapter using the tools i explained above. Do not give up on this story, make it better. Again, i can help you. ttobba |
