I want to see what happens when they finally get to talk. Please, please finish. You have a great story here. Don't leave it. :)

I love this idea! It looks like it's not finished so please, please continue. Edward has great voice. I want to see what happens. :)

:) loved this. hope you continue it

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OH NO OH NO OH NOOOO
YOU BETTA FINISH THE STORY GURL!
i thought i was reading a complete one but anyway you wont understand...
ITS AMAZINGGG!
Please update everyday! :)
I'll love you forever if you do 3

good story just keep writing

Very cute story. hope you update soon, can't wait to read bella's reaction to edward's reaction about 'her girls'. God that was funny!

Can't wait for more

Haha great chapter! Edward you dirty dog you! Can't wait to see her reaction! Update soon :)

wow..great story..and the last chapter hilarious..please make the next chapter funny too..so bella takes edwards mistake with a laugh..update soon please

update...again...like...quickly...you are on fire with your stories.

Love your story! I hope you continue it, I wanna see more Bella and Edward interaction...and I'm guessing your hinting that the brunette for Edwards next movie is Bella. Hope so

Anyways til next time!

I'm dying of laughter right now plz update soon!

Oh that was so funny man oh man feel bad for edward but woah cant stop laughing but I hope bella doesnt see it the wrong way

The story line is good but the amount of grammar issues make it difficult to read. Maybe getting a beta or pre-reader will help smooth the chapters over a bit

OMG! What a start to a story! Wish there was more than two chapters. The ending of chapter 2 was so funny.