sorry but it sucked, u killed akane so weirdly. Man at least if u're gonna kill my favorite character, kill her in a way that shows her strength.

I really like this. It's sad. I love it.

omg. . that is SO sad. a perfect angst fic. excuse me while i get some tissue. .

Wow, you write angst extremely well, and it seems I'm a sucker for a good story regardless of its nature.

u ass that is dipressing PUT an warning on it I was already having a really bad day!

That was so sad. I'm seriously gonna need a tissue here if I intend on reading more. But I know I have to. Your stories are just to good. They're so well written.

Hikari

this was sad! sniff but you are very good writer sniff good job!

Hitomi

This was good!

Hitomi

I think that the Ranma 1/2 characters are stronger than that.

But I still would have thought that this was a good fic.

EXCEPT FOR THE LAST LINE:

"The rest dropped like flies after that."

That ruined it for me. Dropped like flies. I can't adequately express my displeasure, so just imagine it for yourself.

I doubt you'll overestimate.

Oh my gosh...that was soooo depressing. *sob* Now gonna have to find a cheerful story to cheer myself up.

This is truly magnificent to efficiently reduce me to a puddle of tears!

see my review for Creature's Offer

oh, and while i am irritated, i do understand that only a certain type of mindset can appreciate what i was attempting

particularly for C.O.

hm. we'll gotta agree. Good lotline but seems a bit undeveloped.

Also, the people dropping like flies later on... I'm not so sure that would happen. As for Ukyo, being the next one, I couldn;t see that also. Maybe, if you developed it more then the story would be better explained?

However, I did like this story P

The goodbye part was very beautiful ... )

Anyhow, hope to see a revision or a new story from you soon _

Hmm...

Well, this is a good attempt, but it lacks any real emotional hitting power. It's too brief, you don't build up any sympathy for the events. It goes from Akane acting a bit funny to everyone killing themselves. Even if Akane did kill herself, I don't see anyone following suit. This idea may not be bad for a longer fic where you can flush out the details, but as a shortfic it falls flat. Oh, and you misspelled Kodachi. It's Kodachi, not Kadachi.