A very thought provoking piece. I love how you used Rinnie, as I had always wondered what happened to her afterwards.

Do continue.

This was very evocative and moving, even though I read AoF a few years ago, Rinnie and her predicament stuck in my mind. She was a great character for you to choose to elaborate on, and I found myself really moved when reading this, and hoping that everything turned out well for her in the end.

Congrats on writing for AoF too XD Haven't seen any fics posted for it for a long while.