  AXIM 5/14/04 . chapter 3 Rush! Squall. And go get her! oh hyne please don't kill his Quistis... |
 Riyue 1/7/04 . chapter 3hm... is this a continuation of the old Blue Magic or is this a completely new story with the same plot? |
| sailorjr5 7/20/02 . chapter 3 loved it . .please continue . .I think I like the revised better then the first love and moonpower |
| EQJS 4/21/02 . chapter 3 YOu have to finish this! Don't leave me haniging! |
| Tiy 4/18/02 . chapter 3 Woah... this is amazing! I'd forgotten so you'd better post again soon so I don't againg! ;) |
| Hesquidor 4/18/02 . chapter 3 you have got to right some more. |
| Stella Anon 4/18/02 . chapter 2 I haven't read the first version so now that I'm reading this, I really have to commend you. Its a terrific portrayal of Quistis. Only complaint I have is the possible Quall in the future. But thats just me. P |
| AW 4/18/02 . chapter 1 Sorry to write another review right after I just wrote one, but by "unravel" I meant "turn out," not "fall apart." Bad choice of words ; |
| AW 4/18/02 . chapter 3 Hurray! Blue Magic returns! Can't wait to see how this one unravels! |
| Trepie 28 4/17/02 . chapter 3 I don't mind the errors. I'd do worse than that... much worse. This is so great! I like reading the parts where Quistis is with her mom, but I also like the parts where things are actually happening. This will make a great Quall, but please let Quistis wake up in the end. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Lyaka 4/14/02 . chapter 2 Um... thought you might want to know, at the end of chapter 1 ('Mater') there's a typo where you spell 'coma' as 'comma'. Normally I wouldn't nitpick but I was all caught up in the mood and then... "she was in a comma". I cracked up. Probably not the response for which you were hoping, so I thought I'd mention it. |
| WindSailor 4/13/02 . chapter 2 OOH, NICE! I'd love to hear more. It's a real great start, and I'm curious about what's next.
Can't wait to hear more.
(Please do change 'comma' into 'coma' at the end of chapter 2) |
| runaway angel 4/13/02 . chapter 2 Wow! This is truly a wonderful start! You must continue soon! :) |
| tigerstripes 4/13/02 . chapter 1 please write moooooooorrrrrrreeeeee! I have to know what happens!
Just one thing though, if you turn this into a romance please don't make it a Quifer. |
| Apple Pie 4/12/02 . chapter 2 god in heaven, i read this story like... two years ago! and then i saw the title and i was like "is somebody ripping off akira?" and then i looked at the alias and i was like, "ohhh." i get it now. _ like blue magic NEEDS revision! the story was good enough the first time! _ |
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