Rush! Squall. And go get her! oh hyne please don't kill his Quistis...

hm... is this a continuation of the old Blue Magic or is this a completely new story with the same plot?

loved it . .please continue . .I think I like the revised better then the first love and moonpower

YOu have to finish this! Don't leave me haniging!

Woah... this is amazing! I'd forgotten so you'd better post again soon so I don't againg! ;)

you have got to right some more.

I haven't read the first version so now that I'm reading this, I really have to commend you. Its a terrific portrayal of Quistis. Only complaint I have is the possible Quall in the future. But thats just me. =P

Sorry to write another review right after I just wrote one, but by "unravel" I meant "turn out," not "fall apart." Bad choice of words ^^;

Hurray! Blue Magic returns! Can't wait to see how this one unravels!

I don't mind the errors. I'd do worse than that... much worse. This is so great! I like reading the parts where Quistis is with her mom, but I also like the parts where things are actually happening. This will make a great Quall, but please let Quistis wake up in the end. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Um... thought you might want to know, at the end of chapter 1 ('Mater') there's a typo where you spell 'coma' as 'comma'. Normally I wouldn't nitpick but I was all caught up in the mood and then... "she was in a comma". I cracked up. Probably not the response for which you were hoping, so I thought I'd mention it.

OOH, NICE! I'd love to hear more. It's a real great start, and I'm curious about what's next.
Can't wait to hear more.
(Please do change 'comma' into 'coma' at the end of chapter 2)

Wow! This is truly a wonderful start! You must continue soon! :)

please write moooooooorrrrrrreeeeee! I have to know what happens!

Just one thing though, if you turn this into a romance please don't make it a Quifer.

god in heaven, i read this story like... two years ago! and then i saw the title and i was like "is somebody ripping off akira?" and then i looked at the alias and i was like, "ohhh." i get it now. ^_^ like blue magic NEEDS revision! the story was good enough the first time! ^_^