Still Excited for a new Update! Really hope you haven't abandoned your fans because its already off to great start. The character developments are great & I can really see this going in so many directions. I kinda hope Leyas becomes an antagonist that then becomes good. It would give such a great twist!

Hope to see some new chapters soon!

This was a great chapter. Keep up the good work

I never review but I had to. I stumbled on the Redemption fanfiction over Christmas break and loved it. I have then continued to read this one. Man, I must say, Redemption and Immortal are very good. The plots are awesome and Immortal really continues the plot from Redemption. If they ever needed new material to make another gundam series they should look at your stuff man. Its really good and so was this chapter. Look forward to your next one.

Great Chapter! I really enjoyed it. I'm glad I discovered this series of fanfiction! I constantly want to read more.
I can't believe Kira's physical state! And what in the world is Leya's doing?I really hope she doesn't become the bad person in the story. Although, it would be interesting to have the Yamato's pinned against each other. I love that there are mystery characters. It keeps the person guessing as to who they could be.
I really hope you can post soon! I can't wait to see how you unfold this epic series!

I'm happy that you are continuing to write! Although there isn't as much fighting action as your previous fan fiction, I love the secret alliances being formed. If I understood correctly, #6 hasn't been revealed, just his helper. If not, it be crazy if it was Kira's dad Dr. Hibiki. Even though gundam seed has him for dead that doesn't mean it has to be the case here. After all, you did find a way to have flay live despite her dying in gundam seed. I'm sure you could create a loop hole for Dr. Hibiki. I also hope Yaro is alive as that would also be a great twist for Meiko. Hope you post ch. 12 soon :-)

Are there any pics of the mobile suits & characters in Immortal? I know this is the sequel to Redemption but I don't remember seeing any links to photos of the new characters of redemption.

I just wanted to say that I really enjoy reading your works & that Iam very excited to see how this story will unfold!

This is a good chapter. I hope that the action returns soon.

Welcome Back thanks for updating oh no i hope kayla and the others are okay the chapter was good

Whoo wee! You're back! Never thought you'd updated, but you did! :D Anyways, great chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more.

good chapter. I hope that I can see the rest of the plot.

Wow, this has been an epic story. So much heartbreak though. It's becoming harder and harder to tell who's "right", even subjectively. But, I'll keep looking forward to the "happy" ending :)

see i haven't abandoned been caught review next chapter.

good chapter.