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AnthonyAngrywolf 4/2/12 . chapter 1Carl Winslow rushed into the kitchen as Steve was shouting these words, and peered into one of the bags. Unfortunately, seeing all the cheese made him come close to fainting. "Steve," Carl said. "You spent the entire day buying cheese?" And then Carl fainted. LOL |
Coloring Kids 2 2/7/12 . chapter 1 That's it? OK, I don't mean to be rude, but, it's kind of short, isn't it? Readers like myself, don't like to read a story, where you have to ask, OK, now what? |