Do u think u can make this in to a fanfic with chapters

The story was okay... Well, there's room for improvement. It's a little... Dry. And I think you can add a whole lot more into this. Maybe the story needs more background. Okay work.

wow so cool and i loved the one short (sorry for my spelling)

YAY IM SO HAPPY SNIFF THAT WAS A SNIFF SBIFF GOOD STORY I LIKED IT ALOOOTTT GOES INTO A CORNER AND CRIES HER EYES OUT SO HAPPY

Awh! So, so, so cute! Short and enjoyable. Also, I think this stays pretty true to Luke's character, because we all know he's utter crap at using his words. It would be like him to finally just break and sort of attack Cecily with his repressed feelings. Great job :)

more please? Luke definitely be more jealous often. From what I seen in the anime, Cecily feeling is one sided. But this one is definitely great. Hope you make it more longer.

Good, but one small note: it's I'm not im and Safire is really spelled sapphire, but otherwise, Luke shut her up the best way I know how.

short but sweet and it's about damn time Luke kissed her