i like your story

When are you going to review?

Actually, since they are all female, the term would not be yaoi. The term you are looking for here is yuri. The first is m/m and the second is f/f, other then that this story looks ok.

You have remarkable talent in details. Especially describing the way Trowa, Wu-wu and Duo looked as they exited the house. Nice job! _

hey this is cool! write more soon.

THis is good.Continue please?