Neat! :) The Mayor was a neat villain, and at the same time he was human, too. Pretty creative, in my opinion.

And Harry Groener, who did a fantastic job bringing him to life in the third season of the show, once said that his character was kind of like the serial killer Ted Bundy (November 24, 1946 – January 24, 1989).

Harry stated that when he tried to play the Mayor too dark or evil, Joss or the other directors would ask him to tone it down, take it easy and make the part "real nice". In contrast to the series' previous villains and monsters, the Mayor's evil hides behind a mask of humanity. Harry enjoyed this, saying "You don't have to be Snidely Whiplash to be evil. Look at Ted Bundy."

Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)

Neat! :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. Plus, I can imagine this happening to Larry, too. In my mind, even bullies like him get scared and have nightmares such as this one, too. That's kind of fun to write about as well.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)

Neat so far! :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)

Hmm...I think the second one is more Oz-ish, but the first one was hilarious. I like them both!

Neat! :) I like it. And Marcie Ross is such a cool character as well. Plus, Clea DuVall did an awesome job portraying her in the Season 1 episode Out of Mind, Out of Sight, too. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very cool and phenomenally creative writing! :)

I really like this story. Very creative look at the other characters