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Adrimarie 7/20/11 . chapter 5
@Danielle - It's a lot more boring if the chapters are too short and nothing's happening during those short chapters. Besides, having longer chapters gives me a lot more room to make the story believable and a lot more room for ideas and inspiration.

@Maryclaire - Hehe, thanks for the feedback! It's too early to have the "first kiss," after all. :D
Maryclaire 7/19/11 . chapter 5
OMG when i was reading the part when some girl was kissing asuka i was like oh no she didn't hahaha it was a relief that it was only a dream lol but UGHH! i was waiting for the kiss hahahaha and I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Danielle 7/19/11 . chapter 5
Hi im an otomen fan and i like your fanfic, no offense but i think its getting boring because the chapters are long
Maryclaire 7/11/11 . chapter 4
BWAAHAHAHHAHA Tachibana is soooooo funny i wish asuka would do the sleeping beauty move lol omg he really should tell ryo to come back so they can be together again 3 and omg i cant wait for the next chapter theyre gonna see each other now WAAAAAAAAHHHH! 3
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