Haha. Now naughty Veelas XD

Wow, this was great! So much feelings and emotions captured, really beautiful! I loved how you'd written it too - how every sentence began with "tears"!

Oo, I like this pairing!

The tear theme was really creative and it flowed well. It didn't feel forced or anything - just perfect!

You write Gabrielle's accent so well! *loves French accents*

I loved how Gabby went and comforted Sue! She is kinda blunt, like her sister, but still good at comforting. I didn't really expect her to kiss Sue, but it was cute.

and helped poor Sue move on _

OMM, the ending! Naughty, Gabby!

;3

Great work!

-Morghen