That was funny at the end!

Why are there no spaces whenever Cole thinks in italics? Is that on purpose, or accidental?

Well, the last plan Cole had worked, so I'm interested to hear this one!

Well, Cole, some people don't trust people who attack them, huh?

Interesting twist...

Aw :D Would you mind reading my Spirit Bear story? I've only read “touching spirit bear” in class and i loved it :P plus no one else is reading it xD and i'd greatly appreciate it if you did.

love it..you should continue:)

100 percent but why does it have to end

Loved it can you do more touching spirit bear story's your a great writer here some chocolate and if you do more ill give you more chocolate

I think a in chap 5 cole should ask her why she is not talking and she should forgive cole and they should go out ps 1,000 persent and a bag of chocolAte

I think in chap 5 she should beat up cole and they should forgive and they kiss and start dating again ps 1,

Best chap ever 500. Percent a loved it. Here's some chocolate

i loved it hears some chocolate

i loves it100 perent

it was a good chap