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Aznphoenix95 7/16/11 . chapter 1
Now this sounds interesting, I'd love to see where this story goes. What universe does it take place in? Because at first I thought it was in the 'X-men First Class' but then Charles isn't working with the government, and last time I checked Emma isn't Azazel's godmother, but since it is fanfiction, small canon detials don't really matter. Hope you continue this.
Shingo the Pest 7/13/11 . chapter 1
Loved this.
lee-efje 7/12/11 . chapter 1
just read this wonderful mini-serie of yours and i'm blown away how although very much au this fic is everyone and everything somehow still feel familiar ( though i feel a bit uncomfortable about how young raven is and already in a serious relationship)

i love how you changed everyones history a bit yet still have the same effect to shape them as the characters we know.

i especially love how much depth you give charles. i can completely understand why he does what he does which was sadly lacking in the movie.

i promise i'll drop a proper review for each "chapter/story" you've posted for this little gem of yours (have trouble understanding why it hasn't gotten lots and lots of reviews!) as soon as i have more time as real life is demanding my time. just wanted to let you know how much i love love this story of yours.

j'adore!
MirrorFlower and DarkWind 7/12/11 . chapter 1
hahhahaah i loved this i couldnt stop laughing ahhahaha
Sada 7/12/11 . chapter 1
Great story, but I thin is the same with "Burn the Book to Turn the Page".
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