MHM Okay, I reviewed already... But now, I shall write a long one! Well, maybe not so long, because I have to save some ideas for the long review for the sequel!

For future readers... can you go over chapter 10, 11, and 12 so the dialogue is entered everytime it's a different speaker. PLEEASE! ONEGAI! Just for the other future reader's benefit. If you wrote somewhere why you didn't enter, then... gomen nasai! I didn't read it. But yeah...

Other then that.. I loved it! Very good writing skills, one of the best! And how they talk is so orginal! I mean... it's not out of the ordinary.. like some fics are, and that's a good thing! KUDOS!

RANDOM SPACE-

Lolly pops, lolly pops, oh lolly lolly lolly, lolly pops lolly pops, oh lolly lolly lolly. LOLLY POPS! *POP* bum bum bum bum... *Repeat over again until humans near by go insane and crazy, covering their ears from the annoying song that is repeated from one's mouth*

Pretty, oh so PRETTY.. OH SO PRETTY AND WITTY AND GAY!

Yankee doodle went to town, riding on a pony, he stuck a feather in his hat and called it macaroni.

Dirty version yo-/

Yankee doodle went to town.. riding on his mother, whenever he went up and down, he'd get another brother...

You digg? I digg. We all digg the dirty version. Oh yes.. he'd get another brother... from... not another mother.. but from his mother.. and it's his son.. Oh god, must of been a disfigured brother.. that is sad... I feel bad for Yankee doodle. Yet I don't get why he would call his feather, Macaroni? Does his feather LOOK like a noodle to you? I didn't think so...

END OF RANDOM SPACE-

That was awesome.. Okay, Once again, I loved the story, from when I first read it.. and I still do! And I like the 'And the Chef Walks in' parts... Hilarious! I favor the one when Stimp had his hand up Stang's pant hole. *wipes tear away* Classic...

Oh this story was good! Emotional! Wow! Now I'm going to read the sequel!

The ending was emotional, amazing,suspensful & beaUTIFUL! - What a fantastic fic!

The Battle was awesome!

I was a bit confused about the transparent Sakura.

Everytime the Chef walked in to find something that wasn’t such a pleasant sight to him.

It was hilarious!

Interesting! Now the plan will begin to unfold!

uh-Oh! Sakura's been captured... thats not good.

What'll happen to her?

The part about the chef was so funny!

This is really good! I love this story, especially when people's lives are hanging on the line!

this is really good! but can you please tell mee what genki desuka means? keep writing..

The che thing is hilarious. Please keep it up!

whohooooooooooo! finally SS confessed their feelings! your fic was totally great! sorry if i didn't review for your other chapters it's just... i got busy with our exams... now that exam week is over i can surf the net again! and read your and other author's fics _ and for my fic... won't be updating anytime soon... got writter's block... and i thought it would be impossible for me to not get any ideas for my next chapter... *sigh* do you have any ideas? if you fo can you please tell me via email? please! i need ideas... i can't start on my chapter 16... i don't know what to write! what to do with them or with Mitski (my character) that happened to be in her shadow state... please help... onegai... btw... did i tell you your fic was totally great?

-Mitksi

great story! that was really interesting! i really liked the story!

hohoho! I love the character profiles! It told me a lot! And I also think that Stimp is a HUGE stuck up! - Well...like i said...i love the character profiles!

Sugoi Keetra! (Squeezes Desere in a friendly headlock)

Desere: I can't breath...kk...

Kem: I could swear I hear something. Anyway I enjoyed the fic alot. Especially when I died. I was funky fresh.

Antoinne: I know what else is funky fresh...

::Back in Stang's room::

Stimp: Look master! Since the chef was on leave I made dinner for you!

Stang: Well what is it you git!

Stimp: Tacos! (He shows off a platter with tortilla shells filled with legs and arms and other refuse)

Stang: Oh God...

Stimp: See! This one is looking at you, it must want you to eat it!

(The Chef walks in)

Has anyone seen the bag of animal parts I bought? Those are to feed the demon in the basement.

(Stang who has already sampled the "Farfalut c'est Taco" begins to turn green)

Stang: Food escape!

Stimp: I always thought that green was a healthy color.