Enjoyed this story very much. Just now discovering many wonderful Bill/Laura fictions.

Oh come on...this is such a good story...what a cruel twist! Can't believe you stopped there..can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi,

have you read alot of A/R FF as I think you have inadvertantly lifted a few lines from a few more well know A/R stories out there and I would not want to see you get into bother if you know what I mean. Please don't think I am being bitchy, just trying to point out an observation!

I hope this isn't the only chapter! Short but much is conveyed within that - I have a guess on the sub-context and LOVE the idea if that's what I think it is :) hope there's more!