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Reviews for: Not Enough Chocolate
wingswordsandmetaphors 5/27/12 . chapter 1
Yeah, Slytherin Lily is one of my favorites. I love how in every one of your stories, each of the characters is entirely new. It's like, they have the same names and often similar relationships, but different personalities.
Aldastan 5/8/12 . chapter 1
Liked it. :)
daisyatomic 12/4/11 . chapter 1
Yay for Albus! Very cute, great read!
Glynna 8/3/11 . chapter 1
Totally cute!
Rehema 7/26/11 . chapter 1
In some sentences, I see "brother's" and "bro's" when it needs to be "brothers" or "bros."

I'm curious-why does Rosie delight in freaking out her father?

Good God, that's wicked-and weird, in an interesting way. Innocent, adorable little LILY Luna POTTER as a devilish, cunning, smart-*** SLYTHERIN! Whoa! Harry, Ginny, what've you created? Lily Evans Potter and James Potter Sr. must be rolling over in their graves! That's twisted! But a cool new concept!

I liked Albus's forward approach. It's foolproof. Not failproof, but glad it succeeded, though!

Very good job!
Elsyra 7/19/11 . chapter 1
This is the best story I've read all day. Lily is so funny and I love how Albus being forward works. Props to you!
Stelia22 7/16/11 . chapter 1
You know what? I loved that! It was brilliantly fleshed out fic and all the characters were really well characterized. I love that Lily was in Slytherin. And you are right about that whole what could be more sly and cunning than an innocent little girl. I'm going to check out your profile now-what a great story!
Always a Bookworm 7/15/11 . chapter 1
Absolutely loved this- hilarious story with a lovely fluffy ending, and I adored the relationship between the Potter siblings! xD Well done!

Bookworm
Pen-Name-Kitsune-chan 7/15/11 . chapter 1
Super cute n.n Love how you portrayed them, especially Lily.
anon 7/13/11 . chapter 1
"I'm not that gay." TEH LULZ!
BellaRei713 7/13/11 . chapter 1
This was cute. And very enjoyable.

I love AS/S :]
I-love-James 7/13/11 . chapter 1
God, this was so cute! Albus/Scorpius is my favorite next generation pairing. :)) I really loved the “courting” process, as adorably disastrous as it was. I am eternally grateful you didn’t make James an asshole, as many A/S authors unfortunately do; your Lily is very interesting, as well.

*I’m sorry for any mistakes. English is not my first language.*
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