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Krazy4Spike 3/5/12 . chapter 1
Heartbreaking, but loved the end. I hold out hope that these two will find each other again.
CoutureChick13 2/18/12 . chapter 1
That. Was. Amazing. Not going to lie, I've been needing something to make me feel better after these last few episodes of Gossip Girl. I was going to cry when I watched most of them. And Dair shouldn't happen. Ever. Ever. Ever. But back to the point, I LOVED this. It was well written, completely original, and just gorgeous.
Iz 2/2/12 . chapter 1
This was amazing! You're an excellent writer. :)
carolbenatti 1/25/12 . chapter 1
omg

so good!

I must say I cried a lot!

you are an amazing writer!loved this side of chuck

xoxo
Tiff 10/30/11 . chapter 1
OMG you totally made me tear up, more than a few times, with this one. A secret nursery for "their" child... and really, you captured all I would want it be. Bravo. Thanks for making Bass happy again, he needs it, which really means, we needed it. Thanks for a great story and keeping me from doing any real work tonight ;)
Tracy 10/22/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I loved it!
Kou Shun'u 10/21/11 . chapter 1
that was a beautiful story.

it was so wistful in the beginning and just so poignant.

the line that got my heart was ""I'll die if I can't even wish for things anymore.""

i really liked how the tin soldier had the balerina in his hand-it was incredibly lovely.

and i liked how even blair brought her carosel in there even though she was still marrying louis because of how it belonged there.

i liked how just as she was to marry louis -he had taken her things away and i do appreciate how she did go and marry louis.

and then the return to the rooms and how though the bedroom changed the baby room still continued.

and then i liked how they talked of their baby as a solid fact to be there very soon though it was yet to be conceived yet their plans were there- it was very much them.

wonderful story through and through.

(though i guess money and power gets you to bypass the wait legally needed betwenn divorce and new marriage.)
XXCHARLIE 10/16/11 . chapter 1
i thought i lost all hope of gossip girl fan who still love chuck and blair, then i read this. it was lovely and i simply loved it
YouCompleteMe1990 9/21/11 . chapter 1
I love you for writing this.

Its a wonderful one shot and some of the parts made me cry- like the magic toyshop part.
MegamiTenchi 9/9/11 . chapter 1
I really liked this o/s. I love the ways Chuck kept his hope alive, it was heart wrenching and beautiful. I loved how you showed his intense level of thought in the details, with the books and, how he laid things out, like the vanity and the drawers, gah, it was just fantastic.

Critically, I felt a little off on some of the transitions in the story, and though I far from ship BLouis as a couple, it felt a tad bit dismissive in the end where he was concerned.

But if you can forgive the analytical brain I can never shut off, lol, I truly did quite enjoy this story. It was delicious to sleep into and escape reality for a little while. You were pulling my heart strings the entire time, and it was beautiful when Blair and Chuck finally came together at last!
amy 8/18/11 . chapter 1
this story does not get enough credit. would it be weird if i said it made me teary? seriously, best one shot i have ever read. beautifully written. X
svenjen 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Heartbreaking story. Beautifully written. Well done!
jsta 8/3/11 . chapter 1
Amazing story! I love the description of the nursery - warm and clearly full of love. I like how B and C came back together and C's acts of love and hope for the future. I'm glad that B and C were able to be the subject of your lovely work!

Will there be another B/C work in the future? I hope so!
odyjha 7/24/11 . chapter 1
OMG! I cried through half the story! I love it, I truly truly love it so much, it is totally going on my favorites list. I haven't read a story in a long time that made me cry this much.

Everything was great, the nursery, when they finally got together, her demands, you are the queen, I love you...lol...
LeftWriter224 7/23/11 . chapter 1
This is really good! You could make this into it's own story.
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