:D love it! Please update as soon as you can!

O my goodness, I think I found my new obsetion. This is an amazing story I love love love love the character developement and how that this Alice is a few generations from the last Alice. Love the m

PLEASE UPDATE!

I'm a huge fan of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass, and this is such an original, unique interpretation of the books. Honestly, I love this, and I think (in fact) that the manuscript is so original, that if you revise it some, you could easily submit it to be published.

I really hope you continue this story, because I am absolutely in love with it. I have really high standards for fan fiction, and I don't think I've been this passionate about a story for a long time, which means that the story and the writing are very good.

Your fantasy novel is so believable... plausible, I guess would be a better word... and Alice/Wendy/Gwen and Hatter seem like believable people.

Two critiques: I'm guessing you don't have a beta because some of your punctuation is off, and there are a few things that could be edited. So, to make your story even better, I would recommend that you either edit your chapters more closely or you find a beta who knows grammar/mechanics flawlessly.

Second, I'd really like Alice/Wendy/Gwen and Hatter to be a bit quirkier. We've talked in Creative Writing how characters with idiosyncrasies are most believable, and I think you could play those up a little bit more in the two protagonists.

Other than that, though, the plot is interesting and quite well-paced (there's almost always room for improvement in any piece), the characters are believable, and the story overall is VERY engaging.

GAHHH! Just please update soon. I would love to read this story to the end! :)

WOOO another awesome chapter from you xD

Yay. Uh excellent _

Dear god, I'm hooked. I love this lol. Please write again soon. If I don't know what happens next I may have a midlife crisis lol Write again soooon!

Oh crap... there goes my favourite story... :/

OMG this story kicks ass! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :D

Great two chapters

Once a month? Nooooooo! :'( nooooooo D: *dies*

Have you died? :'( please update

Yippeee! I adore the way you portray Hatter and I can't wait for chapter six to come out! MOAR HATTER!

I really like your story but sometimes I don't follow. There is a lot of plot going on and with such a complex story you git going on her you must be very clear with what is going on. Sometimes I don't know who is saying what (at one point it sounded like Gwen was answering herself?) and there are 3 different Queens in the story and sometimes I don't know which on is referred to.

Its still a great story! Just something to think about :)

Awesome

Very good TardisInWonderland