 mikiaSuichi 5/13/12 . chapter 1that was so sweet :3
I loved it! |
 natural selection 4/14/12 . chapter 1I loved this fic so much! It's super sweet and both are in character
Actually, I read this quite a while ago (and forgot to review, sorry!) but this inspired part of my own story, so thatnk you for that c:
Also do I catch a bit of Dune there, what with the stillsuits and all? :D |
 UnluckyAmulet 3/29/12 . chapter 1Oh god, this is so cute! I really hope you write something else with these two, as this was just lovely. I had to go 'daww' at the end when Gamzee asks Kanaya to read him the story again, it's so sweet, especially his initial reluctance. And you have to like Motherly!Kanaya, too. :3
Amulet |
 extraterrestrialAnchovy 1/16/12 . chapter 1Might wanna up the rating? I mean, it IS about a grub picture book, but don't forget Gam's language!
And this was so adorable! Being the good reviewer I want to be, I look for errors, but finds none! That's mostly the case when I read something that I wanted to (As opposed to reading something against my will). |
 Luna Riven 11/16/11 . chapter 1I absolutely adore this story! The idea is cavity-inducingly cute and the imagery is amazing! I love that you used Kanaya's syntax when writing from her perspective! |
 thelizfantasy09 11/8/11 . chapter 1omgawd, Gamzee and kanaya- soooo cuuuuuute 3 add one more to the shiopping wall lol |
 Fumi Raisin 10/30/11 . chapter 1Kanaya and Gamzee are adorable... |
 Hetalia.Power 9/22/11 . chapter 1This was adorable. I almost never favorite stories I don't plan on keeping up on, but this was just simply sweet. I think Gamzee's really just a big sweetheart, no matter how tough he likes to act (namely his Romano-esque language) or how much he likes to deny it, because you eventuallly just see moments like these where he comes out, acting lovable and innocent. Very well written, thank you. |
 Blackrose Neko 9/14/11 . chapter 1Aasldjaflskdjfas. This is so sweet. ;u; It kinda strikes a chord for me, too. Goodnight Moon was my favorite book when I was little. Kudos. |
 Rainie 9/9/11 . chapter 1 Awwww, so cute. :3 |
 blue.half 9/6/11 . chapter 1 c: It's cute.
/approves |
 LyssiLuvr 8/10/11 . chapter 1This is adorable! I can't help but really imagine and get into the characters when I read this! So cute :o) |
 sleepyjane 7/28/11 . chapter 1This was absolutely adorable!
I actually never gave thought of these two and how they would interact with each other but i believe this is spot on.
Great work! |
 Obani 7/19/11 . chapter 1Cute! The dialogue was so true to character, and excellently trollish, but now I have the urge to read goodnight moon... |
 H3H3H3 7/15/11 . chapter 1 Aww, you captured the characters personality's perfectly. |