good writing style and I would know I do forensics. first place two years running

Really deep for being so short. By the way, prose is anything NOT poetry. Just clarifying.

This is very compelling. Even being God can't stop foolishness from destroying life. I wonder though...What became of Giratina...?

Whoa, suicidal Arceus. This is great, it really makes you believe in what Arceus is feeling, in a short, bittersweet fashion. Great!

Wow, I like this! Very good technique; it really makes it dramatic and gives it a punch. It sounds complete but still has an air of mystery like a question still hasn't been answered. I like it. :)