Dude, at least your still alive. I was worried that maybe hurricane Sandy had done you in! No worries about being late, it's better to write a good chapter then a bad one.

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good chapter keep it up

So far, it appeared that Herr Delta wouldn't be making any appearance anytime soon. I suppose that's good in a way. It keep things original, and i do like originals. Still, i wonder where all of these things will go. The inclusion of Eleanor all those chapter back was still much of a surprise though. Either the events of BioShock 2 was but a few months or weeks away... or you have some plan cooking in the back of your head.

M2 Alpha is... brutal, but i keep seeing you purposefully giving her more and more human trait the more she appears. While most of the time things were buried under her unquestionable blood lust, there IS something there you're making. I smell a tragic end coming, but other than that, i can't really see your intention.

David's deterioration is not much of a surprise. He was pumped quite full of Adam, and there was no telling where those came from. Of course, I find it hard to believe that Thompson didn't say anything about it. You'd think after all the crazy stuff in Rapture, one would report that his friend was pumped full of its cause.

Can't say much for Leo and Bane. They're the villain to David and Theta (or so i think). Sure there were more to it, but... hmm, i'll just see how things unfold.

Speaking of Theta, i kept having a feeling that Tony's little discovery of familiar symbol will come back and bite us all in the behind somewhere in the future.

Meh. Keep up the good work and let's see if I can't get more hints of your plan for Alpha and David. UPDATE SOON!

PS: When i first see Big Brother's regeneration ability, i think Resident Evil... then when I see his ability to incorporate genetic memories... well, Resident Evil o.O He reminded me of one of those large crawlers that just refuse to DIE.

Awesome storyline and very intriging charactwrs
Update when u can, can't wait to read the nxt chapter

Alpha is still one one bad ass bitch. Leo is still an asshole. And David is possibly going insane...I LOVE IT ALL! Im so happy to hear that there is stil more to come

took them long enough to realize somethings wrong with David. also eye torture? you are the devil...jerk. anyways great read as always.

I have yet to read any of the alpha sceens, and am not missing anything story wise. You should really rethink what you spend your time writing as a reader shouldnt be able (and willing) to skip half your story and still be 100% up to date.

Alpha just won't die! Great chapter wee bit fucked up but what ever!

Sorry it has taken so long to write a review, been biz.

I am finding Dr. Thompson silence about David almost getting turned into a Big daddy strange. I would have thought he would at least tell Tenenbaum about it. Is he waiting to see if David can deal with it? If David has gotten bigger why has Sam not noticed or even smelled the Adam in him? Interesting that he is remembering stuff from the Adam, I thought only Little Sisters could do that.

I was hoping Alpha was going to spend more time with Mathew Stone. I think what Alpha needs is a Father figure to teach her how to act, someone to tell her No! Leo uses her as a puppet and whore, she really needs kindness in her life.

Kind of fun to see Alpha on the loose, wonder if her conditioning is going to start breaking down since she is experiencing the outside world. I also wonder what effect Mathew is going to have long term on her world view.

That's sounds scary poor David...

Poor David...that ending right there, was a total 'oh shit' moment, but I can't say that I didn't see it coming. As soon as David started acting like a total jerk to Sam, a light bulb sorta went off in my head, like 'Ohhh...snap. I think I know what's happening here!'

I'm pretty much on the edge of my seat now, waiting to see what happens to him...

I think my favorite scene in this chapter though was that one scene in the elevator, where Frank encounters Alpha. That scene was just beautifully written, the way you described him seeing her as an angel was both heartbreaking and mesmerizing, and the scene of his death was just too perfect for words.

All in all, this chapter has to be possibly one of my favorites so far, it just all really came together, and I can't wait for the next. I had forgotten how wonderful this story was!

-Tiger

I figured it had something to do with that. his reaction to Sam was uncharacteristic with his normally uncanny way knowing exactly what she wanted to say.

The ADAM is affecting him... Not good. I feel so sorry for Sam right know, Could you plaese do something about her voice?!

Yeah, figured you wouldn't forget about poor Dave. So, guess he's going nuts now on top of being in a complete nightmare, poor guy... well at least he'll fit in more. Can't wait for whatever happens next.

300-709.

glad to have you back as always a good chapter. cant wait for the next one.