This was a great story. I really enjoyed the characterization of the main characters and the OCC. Really enjoyed it.

Thank you for sharing.

Interesting ideas all around. I was very sad Yori was dead. She is my second favorite supporting character. Anyway, the Paladins reminded me of Full Metal Panic, and Bubblegum Crisis. Do you know how many pages this is? I estimated about 900, bet I'm way over. Heh. Oh, I liked that Kim wasn't instantly up to par after being revived. I figured out who Mirage was right away, but I always figure out stuff like that.

Too lazy to log in but I have to say...I literally spent a day reading this story and I have to say after getting to the ending (which I kind of regret) fuck yeah. You sir have my interwebs and I practically clapped after reading the final chapter. (Which was 5 seconds before writing this) Fucking make this into a book, publish it and make money off it.

Another brilliant story! I could barely put it down from start to finish. Your writing skills are magnificent.

I just finished reading the last 3 chapters. You did such a great job on wrapping up Era of the Warring States . It was such a great story to read and I hated to see it come to end. You are by far one of the best storytellers for being you.

Just when I am about to close the book on the KP Universe there you go again, writing another epic Kigo tale that sucks me right back in. Imensely enjoyed it. I'm pretty sure I will end up rereading this just like your other works. Thank you for sharing!

this hole story was a fun and exciting ride sad to see it finally come to an end but it was a great one.

You've done it again!:) you are amazing, not one dull moment in this story! I absolutely loved it, keep up the great work!

Another great story, and a long one at that. This had pretty much anything that a story could have, romance, action, adventure, violence, it simply had a lot in it. The challenges were really interesting and it does not feel easy for the protagonist, which grabs my attention to it. I also like how the characters would change in certain circumstances, especially in this new world, it feels more deep. The romance was nice, although I would have liked more of them, but was a good one. I also notices some mistakes, since in some parts it was confusing, but it is easy to get over it. It was also good how the relationship developed through the story, it was happy and cute. The ending was great, it was as good as I though if not better.

Overall: great story, I would really recommend it, if you have no problems with F/F romances in it. My score for this story is 10/10. Simply great, is not prefect, but I think it deserves this score from me. Hope to see more from you StarvingLunatic, until next time.

This story was AMAZING!
I enjoyed every chapter up to the end
Hope to read more of your stories in the near future

God I swear I squeeeeed my way through this whole chapter XD

A great end to an amazing epic. This was a great story and it shall be missed. Sorry for the late reveiw. I think I'll go reread some of your other stories now. I'll be looking forward to your next great work of literary art.

Great Epilogue! Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it!

This story was beyond AMAZING. I couldn't stop reading it. I was even telling my GF about it as I read. There so many different spot to talk about that had me rofl, near tears, and biting my nails with dread or concern. You are one hell of a writer. I hope to see more from you in the future. Great work and thanks for sharing.

I loved reading this story. It had a great plot and some amazing characters.