This is better than TV. !
This was tense but, in the best was. And the last line when Spencer and Derek were talking about Loco.

Perfect!

This story were soooo many things! Sweet, cute, suspenceful, hot, funny in certain parts all rolled in one! And the interaction between Reid and the gang seemed very realistic. Great job!

this was such a great story! i loved how you portrayed the gangsters, especially loco :)

totally enjoyed reading this. I loved it so much. That chick was all out crazy, but I liked the way you wrote her and the rest of the characters.

I rather enjoyed this story

I started reading this halfway through and i only reviewed a few times but i really loved this story and everytime i got an alert for a new chapter i always read it that day. I love how this turned out even though i'm sad that Loco did end up dead. I was so mad at Derek for most of the later chapters cuz he didn't even believe that Spencer could be right and not just jealous.

I really was worried when Cherise kidnapped Spencer cuz i didn't want him to get hurt anymore than he already had by that psycho. And it was cute when Derek accidently said that he loved Spencer and then it was awkward for a while. I can't wait to read more of this pairing from you! Thanx, bye!

I loved this story from beginning to end. GREAT JOB! :)

Thank YOU for a brilliantly written story :D You are an amazing writer, and you brought about a perfect end to a lovely piece _ Can't wait to read more of your works :D

This is such a great story Such a shame that it's completed...

AHHH! I thought I had another chapter! Not that the ending you gave was a bad one in the least. I was kinda wondering what else you would other than let us see what happened when they went back to work. But this ending was fitting. You're a fabulous writer and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. Near future? :D *Hint Hint*

Awww...what a great guy our little genius is. I hope he's forgiven himself for Loco's death. It was pretty inevitable. Doesn't really help ease the pain much though. Great chapter.

*whistle whistle*! Lovely chapter, cant wait to read on :D

...Spencer on top is cute, I'm not sure why, but it is...

(happy sigh) This was lovely smut. The line about "finally making love" was so touching.

YES! THANK YOU! BRAVO! Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to use the ladies room...