Nice story!

Luv it!

So lovely :)If only the characters were developed this beautifully in the manga!

Again very powerful, it gives her a depth which few oneshots manage

I love the happy bubbly feeling of this, it's light and it feels fantastic with how hard Tenten trains to be able to be there for her friends.

She's a loyal teammate that knows that she can do better and lives to strive better, I love that about her. And I really like how you've made her grow and learn, with all the training she's done alone, she's independent.

This is awesome!

you are still amazing. i loved the descriptions and the the flow of the storyline. it had such rawness

Absolutely gorgeous. I'm really glad that you've posted this story here; I love your Team Gai fics so much. You write them so beautifully.

So beautiful :)

To make one's advancements known.

Thank you.

And beat the crap out of Temari. Teach that Sand kunoichi wind jutsus aren't everything. Yeah!

Nice. So happy you're posting again.

Lovely. Simply lovely. I love how your writing's so minimal, and yet conveys so much. It's amazing how you doesn't need to elaborate or exaggerate to express the strength of their characters. I missed your writings - I think I'll go look for your LJ stories. :D

The way you write...it always makes me want to go out and do something. Get stronger. I love it.

I'm happy to see another Tenten fic from you! I really liked the kite part, and the subtle concern that Neji shows her is so touching. I think I may go fly kites too. :)

Tenten is total badass flying kites and all _

So cute!

Keep writing!

M.I.

I've actually already read this on livejournal (I happen to stalk your profile for new updates, the crazed Nejiten fan that I am), and I just wanted to say that your writing is as amazing as always. You truly are one of the four pillars of the Nejiten fandom, and I adore every single thing you put out, whether it be philisophical or no! Thank you for posting this, and don't you dare stop writing. The Nejiten fandom needs great writers like you! :D

On another note, I'm so glad that you're back here on fanfiction! I've been lost without you, you know :p