Cute! It's pretty good actually. I don't know how much i by the fact that Eli would be all whiney and crybaby-like in his room, but it's stil lpretty cute.

like ayear after you wrote this i finally read this! it is so amazing! and wonderful! and beautiful!

wow! i really love ur writing and now im gonna go read "listening to the pain"!

thanks!

It's good. I would love to see it in Grace's POV, too. :)

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and no ShElLe-4-EvEr, i'm not from st-exupery but from PLP

Oooh I'm all giddy now. It was fabulous. Tortured Eli is a good thing. Grace's POV would be neato. In any case keep writing!

hey im from laval u said u go to a french school

would that school happen to be st.ex or is it st.tex

i like your story plz continue soon

keep up the good work

bye

WOW that was so good and you write really really good. I hope you will continue,

C'est vraiment superbe, tu dois continuer

bonjour de la Belgique

I love it! I really like fan fictions about Grace and Eli and how they realize their feelings for each other. I would really like to know what made Grace kiss him, what was going on in her head? So a Grace POV will be great. I hope you keep writting and don't worry about your english. I am also french so it is normal to make mistakes sometimes.