Nicely done. The AU worked well for both characters and I would like to read more.

I usually don't read AU stuff much but I really like this one )

Brie

I'm afraid I'm not good a reviewing but I must tell you that I REALLY enjoyed your story ! So much that when I saw that it was completed I felt a little bit sad !

Bravo !

You've been holding out on me, friend! I did not know that you had written an AU of First Class, especially not such a shiny one!

O_O

So pretty! Charles is NOT a pacifist, but it's in a believable way... I always found it sort of funny how someone who could read the darkest thoughts of man was so convinced that there was good there, too. Charles and Albus Dumbledore would make good drinking buddies.

Is this an AU where they aren't mutants? *feels like there's gonna be a note about it somewhere as soon as she presses the Review button*

This is amazing! You perfectly translated the Charles/Erik dynamic into your 'verse and your characterizations are spot-on. I love it.

This is amazing! I just... I don't know. I loved it :). Especially Erik. He's my favourtie character and I love stories like this that go more into detail about his life and what not. And I thought it was awesome how, even though this was modern and an AU, everyone was still in-character.

So, yeah, good job (I'm really bad at writing reviews, I'm sorry D:)!

-Shout in a Whisper

Oh I LOVE this. It was a little confusing and hard to get into at first but unfolds really well, I LOVE the ending especially.

That was brilliant and the fact that you're not continuing just kind of sucks.

This has a lot of stuff going for it and I kindasortreallywish you would continue!

-HM

I like it. First time I think I've read a (more) modern setting with these characters at this age. As for how you displayed Charles- I'm right on with Erik. If someone doesn't know him well, or is ready to accept his authority, he does come off as patronzing and arrogant. Erik being a soldier fits too. I hope you write more in this fandom.

hahahahah nice i loved this great

I really, really liked this. I'm trying to be constructive, but I'm finding it hard to see something that needs fixing. I like Erik's characterization, and Charles is very nicely done. Really, the only bad thing about this is that there's nothing more in this 'verse to read. :D

I really enjoyed this. I don't normally like 21st century fics about these two, but its captivating! You should...take that red C off and continue :D

This is awesome. And RAW. Their dynamic was so ... you translated it very well. I love it.