Oooh, I do hope you finish this! Very well written, a good look into what poor Jack was feeling climbing up that mountain, and I love Aoi. Though why do I get the feeling that she's somehow connected to Jack or his people in some way? Hee! Please finish so we can find out, eh? ;)

It about time you added more to this awesome story. _ I love this, cant wait for more.

ME LIKEY! Your writing style is very professional. Are you an English major?

superb! can't wait for more! _

Wow, this is really great! I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this!

Hey, are you going to finish this thing or not? You can't just leave us all in suspense. Especially when it was just starting to get good! Sheesh.

I like the way you discribed Jack's climb up the moutain. Great job! Please write more!

Hmm interesting, very good, can't wait for more.

Rae: You always say that.

Is there something wrong with it.

Rae: No I was just saying you always say that.

x_x

great way to build off a story! keep it going!

Is Aoi going to tell Samurai Jack what is at the top of the mountain? Why do only the Ahori have this mountain's respect? Jack HAS to conquer this problem. Keep going!

Y'know, it really freaked me out there when Jack almost lost his kattana there...

Not bad. You are going to write another chapter,

right? I LOVE a story where someone finds Jack and gives him a little TLC (I'm writing one myself-check out "Sword Play" when you get a chance!)