aww! this is so sweet! :)

Very cute. I like how you switched between different points of view, though I do think you're exaggerating on how arrogant Sasha is. My favortie, however, is his POV. It's very entertaining. I think they're perfect for each other, and I can't help but smile every time they have a scene together.

Bit of concrit though:

-You're right, you have a lot of mistakes. For that I would recommend a beta.

-A lot of your sentences are choppy and straight to the point, which good to a point, but then you can miss out on detail, which is key to any good story.

Otherwise great chapter, hope you post soon!

Loving the storyline and especially your writing style. Can't wait to see what happens next. Especially love these 2 together.

This is great! You should continue with this plot, write some more! There isn't a lot of stories about these two on here :/