That story was awesome, very romantic

This was a really sweet and adorable little fic. It is definitely one I'd like to see furthered into a multi-chaptered one. *hint hint* ;) Haha. As far as constructive criticism goes, to help out the readers and their understanding of the fic, you might want to consider breaking it down into a bit more fleshed out paragraphs. Other than that, there isn't anything else that I can offer you. I see you've taken my advice on kind of explaining HOW one thing led to another. (: And so, with that being said, I'll now leave the typical write/update more and post soon. I look forward to more Cori fics from you, as always. xx

-Paige

Awwww that was so fucking adorable and cute c; i seriously shouted "HA IN YOUR FACE, SHE CHOOSE TORI" when they kissed and Cat confessed that she always loved Tori :) great..scaratch that make that a Awsome great one-shot story!

Awwww that was so fucking adorable and cute c; i seriously shouted "HA IN YOUR FACE, SHE CHOOSE TORI" when they kissed and Cat confessed that she always loved Tori :) great..scaratch that make that a Awsome great one-shot story!